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A day in my life

Source: Cut ups.

Author: Jason Minty

Title: Sun Sun Sun

Before

Today I think I saw the sun,
yes honestly, It was there.
As I lifted my roller blind
expecting more despair.
My SAD attack now almost gone,
stay out sun, you healing one.

After

attack now almost out  think It was more despair.
My SAD the Today I sun, you sun,
yes healing one, I saw there.
As blind
expecting gone,
stay honestly, I lifted my roller

Really dig the cut version - the first line rocks!



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